like exquisite ripped lace

tell me from the place above
or below, is it duller than here
say hello to the other
of whom I do not speak or hear
does your omnipotence see
your value change, without breathing
are you immortal now, happier
than your flimsy human fate

4 Responses

  1. As usual you’re flying way above my head. But it’s great to see you back.

    ~Thanks Tooty :)!

  2. I like the tone of this one.
    It’s personal, but univeral: I think everyone has thought this at one time or another.

  3. I like this.

  4. my, my, my! the title already blew me over, but reading on made me spark! great stroke!

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