the ocean


why does this ocean have swim lanes
dont call translucent sky water
the sea, it doesnt come
i see you baby, making those waves
sheesh
i want the ocean
topped with froth and a slice of lemon
shells that crumble in a touch
sand that melts in the mouth
i already saw it in your brochure
now take this garbage away
and show me again the ocean i ordered

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4 Responses

  1. I really like this. The images summoned in my mind by your words were wonderful!

    ~MM – Thanks Ambrose :)!

  2. Sensationally wonderful, topped with froth and a slice of lemon. Strange, alive, unique, your poetry just keeps getting better. I love this one.

    ~MM – Thanks Paul!! this is an important slice for me, and its good to see you always 🙂

  3. Great!

    Sounds like Hafiz talking to God.

    ~MM – Thanks Mossy! im not though, as far as i know 🙂

  4. I love the last 3 lines!

    ~MM – Hey Ross, thank you, theyre my favorite too :), good to see you!

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