Once upon a life

One degree more than twisted
One step closer to god
One minute spent on the worshipper
One eon wasted on some broad
One song sung for freedom
One night meant to maraud
One sleep peaceful for ages
One march restless in time
One view painted to uplift
One scene bloodied in crime
One moment making a difference
One age fighting the same
One mark gouged in anger
Ten wounds borne in shame


6 Responses

  1. Hey mentalmists. Nice blog. Went through Chapter 1 of LOS. Will check out the others as well.

    You weren’t kidding about maudlin!

    Quirky Indian

  2. Thanks Quirky Indian :)! Do visit again…

  3. I must admit I didn’t read all of your story but it looks cool and this poem is an intersting mind whirly poem, hello,

  4. Hello Paul, welcome to my blog, and thank you :)! Do visit again…

  5. Fantastic verse!! 🙂

  6. Thank you Kalliope 🙂 !!

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