instant karma

November 8, 2009 — Mental Mist
 

I asked for the power of a rhetorical question
a resounding yes returned
no possibly not
ah the beautiful uncertainty of doubt
so soundly reviled
had I but asked for identity to speak
had I but not spoken
thought a minute about the next seven generations
thought a minute
had I known
courage looks inside hearts
before diving into mirrors
to become someone else
had I not closed my eyes
before stepping on fertile ground
had I been anybody but I

 
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7 Responses to “instant karma”

  1. Maxine Says:
    November 10, 2009 at 3:12 am

    Ah, hindsight and regret. How bittersweet

    Thanks Maxine, yeah I guess so :(

  2. planetross Says:
    November 10, 2009 at 2:15 pm

    “courage looks inside hearts
    before diving into mirrors
    to become someone else”

    I don’t know why I like this, but I just do.

    Thank you Ross :) !

  3. enreal Says:
    November 19, 2009 at 5:05 pm

    you give nothing away but your words… that in itself is a blessing… how I envision the scene, the static of emotion… a blessing indeed

    ~Thanks Enreal, sometimes I think I give everything away, and it becomes too much to take

  4. Tel Says:
    November 21, 2009 at 5:08 pm

    courage looks inside hearts / before diving into mirrors

    Beautiful imagery!

    ~Thanks Tel, its good to see you here

  5. cocoyea Says:
    November 23, 2009 at 8:52 pm

    I can totally relate. Very insightful. Thanks.

    ~Thanks Cocoyea

  6. Tracey Says:
    December 2, 2009 at 7:51 am

    Oh I know these feelings all too well… wonderfully insightful words!

    ~Hello Tracey!! Thanks :)

  7. Duma Key Says:
    December 5, 2009 at 1:49 pm

    deep and thought provoking.

    ~Thanks Duma Key


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