Oh I can’t listen cos I am at work but I will as soon as I get home. And Happy Birthday Sweetheart from to, whoever you are, you must be very special to be Ms Mist’s sweetheart.
YAyayayaya standing ovation. It is wonderful to hear you read the poem, it helped to understand how you heard it. It such a rolling poem and you read it slow and careful and whispering like the spirit it describes. It is like listening to the spirit who spoke the poem through you. Super big bravo even though it is a bit of a dark and haunting poem it is still beautiful and so was your reading, Ms Mist.
like desperate water
red hot mountain metal
my dreams burn
like ocean waves and tendril flames
soon turn and steam away
soon they dissipate
sometimes I dream they return
October 1, 2009 at 4:11 am
Oh I can’t listen cos I am at work but I will as soon as I get home. And Happy Birthday Sweetheart from to, whoever you are, you must be very special to be Ms Mist’s sweetheart.
Thank you Mr.Squires
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October 1, 2009 at 10:11 am
YAyayayaya standing ovation. It is wonderful to hear you read the poem, it helped to understand how you heard it. It such a rolling poem and you read it slow and careful and whispering like the spirit it describes. It is like listening to the spirit who spoke the poem through you. Super big bravo even though it is a bit of a dark and haunting poem it is still beautiful and so was your reading, Ms Mist.
Thank you kind sir
, that truly gives me hope!
October 6, 2009 at 2:42 am
This is hauntingly beautiful… you are a gift
Thank you Enreal, so are you
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October 16, 2009 at 5:59 pm
Applause! This mustn’t be a one-off.
Thanks Tooty, its difficult to hear my own voice, I am trying very hard