footsteps

July 2, 2009 — Mental Mist


step
step step
step

this came partly from one or two of Chico’s work, especially this one, and partly from my infinite capacity to irritate :)

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11 Responses to “footsteps”

  1. Chico Mahalo Says:
    July 2, 2009 at 9:40 pm

    irritating? nah. naughtily playful. ;-)

    clever you are.

    ~MM – Thanks Chico, I try :D

  2. tooty nolan Says:
    July 2, 2009 at 10:15 pm

    An infinite capacity to irritate. That made me laugh. I must use it in one of my stories.

    ~MM – rotfl, you’re welcome to it Tooty :) ! Hope u r good!

  3. zxvasdf Says:
    July 3, 2009 at 12:38 am

    This is awesome. I almost didn’t get it, but happy accident intervened. It’s nice to find something that expands on the potential of storytelling on the www, but I sure wish something like this could be accomplished in print…

    ~MM – Thank you :) ! I had great fun trying it out

  4. gypsy-heart Says:
    July 3, 2009 at 3:07 am

    Loved this..so unique! So glad I paused on each one. :)

    ~MM – Thanks Gypsy Heart :) !

  5. shraddha Says:
    July 3, 2009 at 3:20 am

    wow..that was so difficult…i had come earlier too but did not get it….so came back again now….

    you are very artistic…

    how did you do that?

    keep visiting my blog too…

    ~MM – Hey thanks Shraddha will do :) !

  6. enreal Says:
    July 4, 2009 at 2:24 am

    Very nice… you have an eye for words I see ;)

  7. Tracey Says:
    July 4, 2009 at 4:32 am

    You = Awesome. This is wonderfully inventive story-telling at its very, very best…I love, love, love it!! 8)

  8. Paul Says:
    July 5, 2009 at 12:42 am

    Brilliant! Hypertexting they used to call it. The internet as one vast collaborative canvas. That is supercool, Ms Mist.

  9. Maxine Clarke Says:
    July 6, 2009 at 1:24 am

    Fantastic. I love it when people experiment with poetry in a way I’m perhaps too afraid to.

  10. Mental Mist Says:
    July 14, 2009 at 12:43 pm

    Thanks a lot guys, you are amazing!!

  11. cordieb Says:
    July 17, 2009 at 2:20 am

    Each time I pause on the link, I get words…but the words don’t stay on long enough for me to read the entire passage, and the links do not work. . . is this intential…? :) Yes, Yes, Yes. . . you do have the gift of irritation to the 6th degree. It’s all fun though, I guess. (still irritated) Took me out of my negative mood for a minute. :) Left me a little less irritated than I already was…. Lol. PLL, C.

    ~MM – ROTFL, yeah it was intentional, it was an experiment in transience basically :) … glad you stayed to read it whole, thanks Cordie!!


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